let those glaring eyes pierce thru
my pain
and let it burst
all out, let me be
empty again
touch me
let my skin burn
that scars may turn
fresh wounds
that will let out
false hopes, open ended lies
or were they
dreams?
kiss me
let me feel the softness of your lips
that will make mine bleed
for prayers
uttered in despair
of longing and faith
love me
let me see the truth you hid
with petals of desires and thorns
of adulation..spoken in silence
that very softly left me
dead
The last two stanzas are really so intense!" Kiss me ,let me feel the softness of your lips that will make mine bleed for prayers !
ReplyDeleteI imagine you sitting in front of the crucified soul for prayer and the blood from his wounds mingle with the blood from your lips ! Both the result of PASSION !
Hi Rina,
ReplyDeleteIt's brilliant write...
Each time a read...It pulling me in its depth...Starting 3 stanzas was excellent...I saw love/hope/philosophy mingled beautifully...Last stanza is good,however for me death is not the powerful ending to me...It would have been better by ending just like other stanza/s... :)
Logic/flow is also excellent...i.e., look/touch/kiss/love...
Hats off to you, Rina
amiya, and you ask me why i thjnk so highly of you? :)
ReplyDeletevijay, i can only thank you again and again and again..and then i wont have thanked you enough still...